IELTS with Soniya

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Topic:
Most visitors to museums and historical sites tend to be tourists rather than local residents. Why do tourists visit museums and historical sites more frequently than local people? What measures can be taken to encourage locals to visit museums and historical sites?
There is a growing issue where museums and places of historical importance are frequently visited by only tourists rather than locals. This can largely be attributed to a sense of familiarity and high entrance fees for most famous museums, but this issue could be tackled by organizing interactive exhibitions and offering discounts.
One compelling reason why so many locals are discouraged to pay a visit to historical landmarks or museums is that most of them are already familiar with the content of exhibitions and cannot find novelty even if they visit such places. With many locals visiting museums as part of their school trips in the past, or gaining knowledge about the iconic places through documentaries or history lessons, they lack the motivation to explore ancient sites or monuments. Whereas foreigners find these places intriguing as they perceive visiting historical places as a source of knowledge and once-in-a-lifetime experience, which significantly improves their attendance. This is exemplified by Colosseum, Rome, which attracts tourists from all over the world annually but fails to garner attention from locals, as local residents are already familiar with most of the routine exhibitions in this museum.
Another factor contributing to a lack of interest by locals is that they view entrance fees to historical places as an unnecessary expense. Since ticket prices to most historical places are quite high or identical with those for tourists, many people from the area lose their interest in such places. For instance, surveys in Paris reveal that a significant number of Parisians avoid iconic sites like the Louvre primarily because of high ticket prices and long queues, even though they live nearby. Therefore, high admissions fees can discourage local people’s attendance to historically important places.
To address the growing issue of local’s disengagement in museums and historical heritage, it is imperative for museum authorities to take decisive action by regularly updating their exhibits and offering novelty for locals as well. Given that most locals have already explored displays in local museums, regularly rotating exhibits or borrowing artifacts from other museums will counteract this by improving their interest and enthusiasm in historically important landmarks and museums. To ensure its effectiveness, responsible bodies in museums should introduce cultural workshops, and interactive events tailored for residents.
Additionally, implementing discounted rates for local residents is crucial in mitigating poor museum attendance by locals. By offering lower ticket prices for native citizens, museum authorities can eliminate the financial barrier and increase a sense of ownership, thereby stimulating a sense of renewed interest in historical places among locals. Take Barcelona as an example, where people enjoy free entry to major museums on certain days, particularly on weekends. This initiative has dramatically increased local attendance in recent years.
In conclusion, even though a sense of recognition and high charges for museum entries are the reasons which demotivate local people from frequent visits to historical landmarks and museums, frequently refreshing the content of museums and offering tickets at reduced costs for local people can deal with this ever-increasing problem.
By Soniya Maratovna
Time allowed: 37 minutes
Word count: 504
A bit wordy, but given that I am trying to activate lots of words in writing, it is normal. How would you rate this essay?
P/S: Approximate score by my teacher: 7.5

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